The story deserves better and the author is more talenter than the book shots, but it’s marred by several things. Too many first person charachters combined with skipping recklessly between times makes it confusing on many levels. The sex scenes would benefit greatly from a 90 percent reduction AS Thea are very repetive, boring and mostly unneccesary.Even worse is the choice of narrators. The male narrator read everything word in an exaggerated dramatic tone. When every word is dramatic, the result is little better than if every word was monotone. Also There is little to no varations in voices regardsless of who’s speaking. The female narrator is even worse. The combination of a very slurred speach and speaking very fast requires the reader to concentrate very hard to catch what she says.