Claire
28 sep. 2021
To sum it up, it amazes me that this book was somehow written by a woman. There was far too much focus on how the woman felt and looked, and not in a good way. Using crude vocabulary like “pussy” in a normal context really diminishes any tension you’ve built up. The actual erotic parts were basic, and almost plain boring. The characters were not charming or seductive in any way, and while that might be okay in other genres, in a erotic story that seems like the point, especially with the type this booked seemed to be going for.It was written as if the author has never met an actual real life woman. Or even been truly interested in the depth of one. What really sent me was how there was an attempt at giving the woman a backstory of sorts, when in reality it was a weird montage of Percy Jackson and a beach babe..