Great story..

boring i expect more from this story.

Super 👌💐 semmmmmmma

Interesting story. Reader has made it more interesting.

Very interesting, i have the same feel what i had while story reading. Jayalakshmi mam's voice also awesome

Thrilling...with good ending...

Nice

First i thought he revealed everything at starting itself but amazingly he turned it into suspense. I don't know how he always narrates unpredictably. The narrator voice is nice. It reminds me of my moms narration to me.

Good attempt...👍

Very bad ending